Quiet Poetry Lounge : Sorry

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bluewater, Feb 20, 2004.

  1. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I did not know
    It was not my intention
    To come into your world
    I took a step
    Well maybe two
    Because I seen a face I knew
    I was thrill
    so very true
    and then it happen again

    It did not come to pass earlier
    That there is still
    an uncomfortable blend
    that haunts us still
    my old friend

    This I had forgotten
    Sorry again
    I was just so happy
    to see a old friend

    Another bad mistake again
    I keep doing that like
    Sam I Am

    Just to keep the story short
    So not to offend
    I will leave
    the way I came
    Respectfully once again

    It is sad when ever I find
    A place to call my own
    I am off in search
    Of another comfort zone

    Even those when I came
    It seem to be my favor
    I guess the vibe
    Just blew my mind
    Until I went
    A step to far
    Or maybe 2 or 3
    And now the feeling
    Is not the same
    As it was when i first
    began..
    So i say it once again
    I am Sorry
    Fina The End
    Old friend
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very heartfelt scribe
    likes the way it flows
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    :read: Beautiful read sister, just 2 beautiful indeed
     
  4. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Sister Angel thank you so much for feeling me on this...thank you for the love:heart:

    hi Brother Python i am so happy you like this drop...thank you for the love:heart:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes we do things that are not meant to end up as they do, but hopefully we learn and don't relive past mistakes...diggin this flow.
     
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    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful...this is such a lovely flow
     
  7. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you watizaname and phenomenalwoman for the love on this flow..i was rumbling ..when I cut it loose...:)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o' my sorry
    it was not to be
    and see a friend
    was indeed a thrill
    but as u cast out
    to venture , searching
    for the comfort zone
    well sway my way
    dis the zone u belong
    in as we cascade under
    the cherry moon
    yes i'm sorry
    just when i thought
    out time was up
    it came to me again
    an old friend
    dat luv ya

    dis here was str8 awesome sistah Bluewater
     
  9. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    True indeed I went a float
    now I have founded my way back home
    it is just that when time goes by
    I forgive with a open mind
    And then when I feel the vibes not return
    I become a little bended
    Feeling my world coming to a end

    I turn and you are there so true
    a true friend indeed is what I need
    so happy I do not have to say
    The end But the beginning
    of a new friendship

    Thank you for the feed Rich...:)
    stright from the heart
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am most heartfeltedly feelin ya, sis, and I'm lovin your tight flow. This is on hit.
     
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