Black Poetry : somethin i throw together

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by BaduX, Dec 31, 2003.

  1. BaduX

    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i love rap...don't get me wrong...jus how i felt at that moment

    rap...nothin more than a mumble mumble with a slight beat & a curse for life...sooo much cursin...oh my gosh...if i give you a poem and a hot beat...what have you...it could have you in the kitchen doin the c-walk...ready to fight... coats off, earrings tossed and bones thrown... a half a second, yo as is knocked out... a blow to the face...pain... a deep gasp... a crack @ the flesh, leaving yo soul bruised...that hurts...bitter sweet lies of life...sinks at my heart, burning my breath to speak...covering my eyes to the truth of reality...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte keep tossing it together like dis
    flow on BaduX
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    likes dis drop...
    flow on......Angel
     
  4. BaduX

    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ and Mzblkangel
    :thanks: for the read
    GOD BLESS ;)
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your welcome sis
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You just this down...liked the way you dropped it.
     
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