Black Poetry : You Feel Somethin' Like Real

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  1. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You feel like in the
    Midnight I can get wrapped in your arms
    kept safe from all harm
    Like you are my
    For real lucky charm
    And I your shining light so bright
    And I swear by heaven's moon light
    And the very stars that are you are my
    Eternity because you will never turn on me
    And yet still I hope and hold fast
    That I haven't called you a diamond
    When in truth you are glass
    I feel like you are somethin like real
    I can see it in your eyes like some brilliant surprise
    And yes I'm want to explore go beyond every door
    As long as you allow me to
    Do nothing more in this world but feel you
    Even though these emotions pour
    I still say i've been down this road before and
    I am sure that it is hard to tell
    If you are a piece of heaven or undercover hell
    But when lying next to you I don't care because
    A hint of truth i sense in the air
    And in that moment I trust only how I feel
    BECAUSE YOU FEEL SOMETHIN' LIKE REAL :smokin:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sure u can be captured
    in the realism of captivity
    of warmth and beauty
    in the arms of ya charm
    to feel deep and lucky
    as it cascade to be felt
    and protect you from harm
    and all it's fears kiss away
    your slumbering tears yes
    you can feel the warmth
     
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    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I felt you in the piece, Soulful...Nice Poem!

    Peace,
    Drizzle
     
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    Love the flow sis... I got wraped in your words. :look:
     
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    :great: i am feelin this! i almost heard you reciting it, it was so clear
     
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    Sure can be an uneasy feeling when you're feeling you're in paradise, but you're waiting for the other shoe to drop so to speak. Wonderful poem, many have been in this place.
     
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    Girl, whatever u're feeling
    I want it.
    This is cooler than a fan.
    I likes..
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Once again I am humbled to hear such a positive feed from the work of my mind and soul I am happy to know that the flow sounded loudly in the mind and ears and heart of the readers of this poem. Thank you for the love and I hope to continue to speak without opening my mouth.
     
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