Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by triniti424, Aug 13, 2004.
I think this might be a lover's quarrel. I'm backing out.
By the way, I know you know better.
Hey, I loved your flow though.
now how am i suppose to reply to that
if i say tite flow i might get slapped
if i say i liked the point..responded to the title
it might seem artificial in your world
but in mine..that maybe how i unfurl
now don't get me wrong I think your point can be true
but if one takes the time to come to you
that time is part of who they are..
and sometimes it's just emotion that takes one out
and no words are there to shout..
and you say i liked that piece, or I appreciate
love is giving..not receiving..
love is doing and believing..
now with all that said and done
I liked the piece .. it stirred my EGO and took me on this run..
PS,,,one of the suggestions I had for premium members is in fact to have
real discussions of our work in a forum..with honest discussions and critique..knowing that it is a safe love haven to speak. you said many things that i have thought (now you want me to get specific...but i ain't)
Deepy, I will be sure to present your feedback for discussion before the mods, k.
Much love sister
All I can say...is
~ AMEN ~
*got my fan...fannin & rockin...fannin & rockin...*
Tell it like it is...Sometimes it just needs to be said...
Cuz ain't nothin in this thread but truth...
We need to take this Concept of Love to a
a much higher level...
supa props sista...
Sista Deepy.... My sweet sista Deepy Ya know what...thas a wonderful idea smh (shaking my head)
Gosh sista i am so sorry thas a great suggestion smh (i spose i need be READIN more in that specific area smh cause i dont know how I missed that bright idea smh sorry sista)
But in regards to ya reply...see sista those were just arbitrary examples
Last night i couldnt sleep and stayed up to read and see the board
For MANY (yourself NOT included) they were just stickin in the same generic replies into thread after thread and then expecting people to give sincere replies to their OWN work...see sista what i can say about you is...if i was to go back through the threads...after reading YOUR replies to ME i can say...that i REALLY felt that you were listening to me and not jus rushing and going through the motions to fake what we have come to call "showing Love" here in our cyber home I am not saying that USING these specific lines will be interpreted as "fake" or what not...its the idea behind it. In the world of the dot.com our words are all we have to ascertain each others sincerity...so if you tell me for every thing i share with you happy sad and depressing "thas tyte" how can i be sure that you really feel that way unless you take the time to go a lil further and expand on that allowing your words to surpass the handicap of me not seeing your vocal tone and body language when you do choose to respond to me. Of course like I said sista I have neva felt that way about any of your responses at all...after reading YOU I feel like you REALLY read me and not just my title. Oh and sista...I would LOVE to get your honest critique about my poetic attempts good and bad... Thank you sista for your honest feedback
Brotha Money... huh?? LOL smh Usted es un hombre difícil difícil. smh my goodness lol This was not in no one shape or form directed to one person at all brotha In fact it was my own venting of the fact that some responses here seem to be only selfish attempts to direct eyes toward their own work. I mean why bother to even respond to me if you havent really bothered to REALLY read me. IF these works are what they have always been perpetuated...and that is real emotive pieces that our famlee are chooosing to share with us...then the LEAST I can do is take time to truly read it and absorb it and then reciprocate with the Love that this home is built on...
But i dont think its about a lovers quarrel lol or maybe i should re-read myself This wasnt directed to anyone in particular at all but thank you for the read brotha
My Soul Sista Sage... lol @ the church fan Gurlllllll smh You dont think i was too mean do you... gosh lol well i know you know i know we know what i meant lol I am not surprised though that there are those who do try to slip off lil here and there as "love" since its evident in the real world... then of course it would only be normal to see it here via cyber city lol
Brotha Khasm... yeah i know you understand lol nuff said
this was off the hook sis..smh :driveby:
i aint got nothing but love fo ya....
flow head on....let it be heard!!!!
Peace and Love...
Well, I didn't get all of my sleep last night. QQn smh
I believe you.
de truuf is de truuf...
let de chutch say
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