Black Poetry : Smoking Cigarettes

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  1. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Smoking cigarettes,
    surrounded by a haze of smoke.
    I cling to the last ember
    of this thing that seems to give
    me hope.
    my nerves are raw,
    my mind is a mess,
    and the only thing that matters
    is smoking to relieve this stress.
    I kick my shoes off and unbutton my
    shirt;
    I settle back in the chaise and run my fingers
    through my hair.
    I have to make a choice of smoking
    Winstons, Malboro Lights, Camels or Salems,
    it really don’t matter just as long as I can get
    comfortable, identify my stresses and nail them.
    I’m smoking cigarettes and feeling so good,
    a breeze coming through my open window and the ringer
    cut off on the phone;
    I’m laidback puffin’ and groovin’ to Nina Simone.
    so I forget about my long day, and with each and every puff,
    my stresses are gone;
    I’m feeling good and relaxed smoking cigarettes and moving
    to my groove in the privacy of my home.

    Copyright 2004 Anno Domini/ “Earth’s Wynne” Publishing
    ~Dior X. Robynsonne
    *from my soon-to-be published book,
    “Wynne of the Earth”
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Although I'm nicotine intolerant... :wink:

    I've never heard smoking sound so sexy...
    and relaxing...combined with a lil...Nina Simone
    now that's the way to go...

    I'm lifted in the puff of your flow :sand: ...so

    Flow on...Poet...I can dig it! :spinstar:
    :smokin:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nothing like the comfort of relaxing at home
    in ya own groove very tyte drop indeed here
     
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    Not a smoker myself, but you made this sound so relaxing, keep flowing.
     
  5. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The funny thing is i'm not a smoker either LOL But I thank you for your love.
     
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    lol..dang...this is tyte...i like..i like...
    :heart:
    -story
     
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    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you love. I appreciate the love and respect. :thanks:
     
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