Quiet Poetry Lounge : Slow flow...Last Chance....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Oct 8, 2004.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Last chance

    Last dance

    With you


    For the starz fall

    And the moon dies

    Last chance

    Before I walk

    After the talk

    Last chance


    The warmth of you

    I will miss..

    The soft kisses

    I will seem to yearn

    But it will fade

    In time


    Last chance

    Before I say good bye

    Lover and hello friend

    For I need to take a long walk

    And think….

    Last dance

    Last chance

    For romance


    Friends we are

    Friends will be

    But right now

    I need to fly away

    And think on my own

    For now I am lost


    Last chance

    I will always be....

    But the pain is deep

    And the scare hurts

    You will always be....

    I need to go

    But I will be around

    And know what I feel for you

    Is real….

    Last chance


    Last chance

    To take my hand

    Last chance

    To hold on to me

    Last chance

    To say you love me

    Again

    Last chance

    To say what’s in your heart

    Before I fade

    To that friend you so need

    Last chance

    For my head is spinning around

    See I thought anything was possible

    When it came to us

    Last chance

    Last dance

    With you…..

    Are we going to

    FOREVER dance

    Or is this our

    Last dance......

    (C) 2004
    unknown files
     
  2. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    I hear that Sis!
    After so many chances
    you can only end up at
    the last.

    loved the drop!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sometime that last chance is a sweet hello !
    u can only take in so much now u have to
    take da last chance before da long walk u
    know i been here before and the last dance
    of a chance was a sweet hello around da corner
    tyte felt drop ......
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PurpleMoons..thank you sis for the love n support yes after all them chances
    someone gotta wake up and take hold of whats real ....glad you likes

    $$RICH$$..when it seems like the last chance its only the beginning
    indeed of a sweet hello....thanks for the love and given wisdom
    thanks for letting me know you can feel it

    peace
    angel
     
  5. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Kind of feels like the song is playing in the background of this poem! Nice drop indeed.
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love on dis CP happy you likes....

    Peace
    Angel
     
  7. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Deep, tender and real. Girl, I do know what you mean. Done this myself too. Esp lovin this line:

    Before I fade

    To that friend you so need

    You laced this together beautifully.
     
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    OldSoul Permanent Black Man PREMIUM MEMBER

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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gempis..thank you and happy you enjoyed....

    oldsoul..really thank you you have a way in making me blush
    thank you for the love.....lets me know
    i did a well job in bringing this

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    I'm with Gempis on this...
    that line was heartwrenching
    ...having to take a new place
    with a love that is undying

    Nice rhythm...
    Sage
     
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