Black Poetry : Back"Yard" Flow (slow whine)

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  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Fe me Jamaican gurle....Mistress of the Stroke


    she ain't 'fraid
    a no duppies
    in the midnight
    comin to steal
    her soul

    she gonna dance
    a slow whine
    in a tropic heat

    she ain't a scared
    of the backroads in the
    birthplace of visions
    that now unfold...

    she gonna dance
    a slow whine
    in her bare feet

    she ain't a wantin
    for nothin
    she be the
    vessel of life
    self-contained

    she gonna dance
    a slow whine
    in a burnin sand

    before she cum
    she came hard/fast/smooth
    the way she move
    her waist was
    pre-ordained

    she gonna dance
    a slow whine
    in her native land

    she gonna tangle
    micro braids with
    funky dred
    locks and drink sexy
    from his ice box

    and whine it up
    slow

    arousin/touchin passion fires

    while she dance...

    solo

    alyce, 2001
     
  2. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Galfren!!

    A yu dat a talk bout de duppie dem ina Jamaica land??
    Yeah Mahn Me a go come back to Jamaica an' fine me roots
    Ina coconut tree an' drink sweet sweet passion fruit juice!!

    Now you know this schitt is sooooo sweeeeeet!!

    Only you can force me to talk my *Island* tongue by way of Canada!!

    LMAO!! This is way too much fun for two coloured girls
    to be having at 4:00a.m......& .....1:00a.m...Between a Rock &* a Hard Place...time!!!!

    Do they have coconut trees in Heaven ?? ;)
    What about passion fruit??

    Thank-you so much for this A!!

    In the name of The Bee Gees...Anne Murray...Peter Tosh....Isley Brothers...Kenny Rogers & Bob Marley too!!

    *beef pattie & coco bread*

    Seen??!!!

    a we a run tings!!!!!!

    :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping:
     
  3. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lovin' the dialect and this piece Alyce!!!

    Great work here!!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    .:)smiling:)

    let the mistress of the stroke stroke the things that need to be stroked...whether it be coconuts, palm trees, or ropes...she gotta stroke the stroke in order to get the yoke.

    do that dance:)

    LET THE RIVER FLOW.
     
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    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Talent... Pure, gifted talent. Awesome piece Alyce!

    Thank you,
    BE
     
  6. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I just had to hit this one again!!!!

    This is what you call a true friend!! Somebody that will go the extra mile just to speak to you in your native tongue!!

    *I-am-blessed*

    :heart:
     
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    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...sis

    your pen is too
    special for words...!

    but...you know this!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    BEAUTIFUL

    ITS NOT THE BEAUTY OF IT
    BUT HOW U BRING BEAUTY
    TOO IT ALYCE .......SISTAH GURL :kiss:
     
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    i ree star

    yea feel the flow
    got the jamaican flow
    trinidad
    haiti
    barbados
    guyana
    virgin islands

    all that and i feel ya

    whine yo' girl

    Peace
    ALYCE


    DSSNY
     
  10. alyce

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    givin all praise and tanksgivin

    to Jehovah Shalom...God of Peace...for ever blessing us all with scenes we share outside our dreams!

    And thanks and praises to Him who gives us new mercies daily, and beauty beyond measure in the smiles of our family and friends.

    Poets, we inspire each other. Our sweet madness is interdependent; cannot/does not stand alone. It's a reciprocal thang!

    Send a prayer for traveling mercies as Ms. Hunter flies to her homeland next week, y'all.


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