Quiet Poetry Lounge : Slow flow...Last Chance....

I liketed this

I liketed this
and I could hear donna singing in the background too!
 
gempis said:
Deep, tender and real. Girl, I do know what you mean. Done this myself too. Esp lovin this line:

Before I fade

To that friend you so need

You laced this together beautifully.


I'm with Gempis on this...
that line was heartwrenching
...having to take a new place
with a love that is undying

Nice rhythm...
Sage
 

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