Black Poetry : REPOST MY FIST PIECE (PHENOMINAL WOMEN) IN honor of her WEEK!

[THEONE]

SHINE on poet, just wanted to bring back the first peice, I ever wrote, to honor our poet of the week since it bares her name!!


Phenomenal Woman

What a sight for sore eyes
Better yet no eyes,
Are needed
To grasp this mental master piece
My mind is feeding me!
Like a fiend on crack
I’m brainstorming, contemplating
Trying to play it back!
Replay I tell you
Replay I chant again
Feed this unnurtured mind
You’ve left starving!
I mean I’m stuck in a daze
Mind in a haze
Punch Drunk some my say!
I’ll just say addicted
To this phenomenal picture
You’ve depicted!
A stain on my brain
Only one thought remains
Is this love?
Gods gift to man.
Yet and still some can’t understand!
Let me break it down
Its poetry in motion
Waves rippling through the ocean
With the movements and grace of a mare
A caress like warm summer air!
Scents so undescribable
Roses might be an exceptional title
But for now lets say this
Phenomenal Women in all her bliss!

By:
Lj
2002

 

[1poetsought]

A Phenomenal tribute!

Good looking out One, for one of our very own.

 

[phenomenalwoman]

nice flow, thanks for bringing it back i wasnt around to see it the first time

 

[$$RICH$$]

awesome flow on a sweet sistah Queen

 

[watzinaname]

Remembering this one, still loving the reasons and the rhymes. This was a lovely gesture, TheOne.