Black Poetry : REPOST MY FIST PIECE (PHENOMINAL WOMEN) IN honor of her WEEK!

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  1. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SHINE on poet, just wanted to bring back the first peice, I ever wrote, to honor our poet of the week since it bares her name!!


    Phenomenal Woman

    What a sight for sore eyes
    Better yet no eyes,
    Are needed
    To grasp this mental master piece
    My mind is feeding me!
    Like a fiend on crack
    I’m brainstorming, contemplating
    Trying to play it back!
    Replay I tell you
    Replay I chant again
    Feed this unnurtured mind
    You’ve left starving!
    I mean I’m stuck in a daze
    Mind in a haze
    Punch Drunk some my say!
    I’ll just say addicted
    To this phenomenal picture
    You’ve depicted!
    A stain on my brain
    Only one thought remains
    Is this love?
    Gods gift to man.
    Yet and still some can’t understand!
    Let me break it down
    Its poetry in motion
    Waves rippling through the ocean
    With the movements and grace of a mare
    A caress like warm summer air!
    Scents so undescribable
    Roses might be an exceptional title
    But for now lets say this
    Phenomenal Women in all her bliss!

    By:
    Lj
    2002
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A Phenomenal tribute!

    Good looking out One, for one of our very own.
     
  3. phenomenalwoman

    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow, thanks for bringing it back i wasnt around to see it the first time
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome flow on a sweet sistah Queen
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Remembering this one, still loving the reasons and the rhymes. This was a lovely gesture, TheOne.
     
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