Quiet Poetry Lounge : PILLOW TALK (midnight mass)

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    It's midnight my love still gone
    talking to my pillow
    what da hell went wrong
    holding it like tight
    squeezing it right
    wishing it was my baby tonight
    reach fo da phone
    only da message came on
    here i am home alone

    Got this feeling really strong
    up in this illusion wit a blissin tone
    envision my love tonight
    in da midnight hour of hot delights
    pillow talk my heart try to fight
    she never round when i wanna get loose
    little do she know her chicken out to roost
    i can't help but think real deep
    need some lovin can't even sleep

    I tryed my hand but it won't do
    I need my baby to see this through
    another night alone at home
    talking to da pillow about something strong
    wondering what the hell's going on
    turn da lights down to a soft dem
    hug my pillow and said it was kim
    only problem it never touched me back
    pillow talk sho nuff is whack !
     
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    Yes, I've been talking to my pillow quite a while, holding it tight too, but it has yet to do what I want it to. You think they sell some sort of magic pillow out there? No? I can relate, well written scribe poet.
     
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    lol....watz they sell something fake like da real deal but deep inside i cannot feel
    so my fluffy pillow is all i got u know how dat be until we mix and match ...
     
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    Gee whiz, are you and that pillow, really alone?
    I'm so susprise you even made it home.

    yet I'm glad you had that pillow talk
    when you finish, I want you to pack up and walk!

    Ya gots to get the hell outa my home and my bed...
    since this women of "Kim done went to ya head.

    I'll tell you the reason we didn't connect,
    cause I am the ONLY QUEEN ...or did you forget?

    I've been called other women's names, what a sin
    now you got the gaul...to call me KIM?

    and that's why...

    While you was waiting at home for some "Kim,
    I was out getting my groove on with "Tim! ​
     
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    what !!!

    :SuN018:

    Now here we go again
    u mess wit dat guy name Tim

    and u want me gone
    baby what's da hell wrong

    i know i said kim
    but that's one of my lawyer nem

    u know ya da only one !

    so where was u last night
    when i was holding dat pillow tight
    i guess tim had u right
    but he won't see u tonight

    I'm da king of this throne
    nobody gonna take my home
    but i'll leave cause it's all wrong
    u and Tim now written in stone

    ok baby i'm gone but i'll write u before long'
    maybe we can still get it on
    but pillow talk is like a clone
    u might be talking soon when ya alone
    :qqb009:
     
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    wow fam! I enjoyed this write and flobacks from da Queen!! Touching and funny! I do however, understand it's deeper context...
     
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    Do you really! ...can you help me out ? give some advice or something
    what a man to do when he's home alone wishing for someone who is afar.
     
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    I overstand the emotions you displayed.the usual results are hands that hurt, and wet pillows.lol.as far as advice goes, no reminiscing. keep your head up
     
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    got cha .......and i been doing that trying to reach the next level thank u
     
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    yea...I agree with S4E.....for their is really no geniune subsitution for garden of fruit....


    hard thing....no pun intended
    :blush:
     
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