Black Poetry : Pillow Talk

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  1. asimplepoet

    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Pillow Talk
    After we've complete the dance of lovers
    And we've begin to turn back the covers
    I stare at you in complete fascination
    I know it goes way beyond simple attraction
    But I wonder is it just passion and satisfaction
    What I'm seeking requires you complete attention
    I know that you set my body afire
    And you quench my sexual desire
    But my soul is yearning for a spiritual release
    That makes the reality of time seem to cease
    The touching of my soul is surely no casual affair
    For the connection that I seek is something rare
    I want that love that people speak of in hushed tones
    It goes way beyond a simple mating or love jones
    I desire a ying to my yang
    Something to make my heart sang
    I crave the biblical conjunction
    You know the missing rib of connection
    I long to be the answer to your question
    You know the place of your final destination
    So as we lay please take in consideration
    That so much more is my aspiration
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ahhhh yes the warmth and beauty of pillow Talk

    Welcome to Destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the house of peace & respect
    welcome from above as i bless this some love

    Tyte poetic flow , had me feeling all romantic
    and hearing the pillow talk ...continue on poet
    again welcome within the Family here......asimplepoet
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh wow i love this poet alot. i liked to say hi and welcome and do continue on please. i like the style of yours.:love:
     
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    Nice sensual drop poet. Keep shinin' :)
     
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    Thank you for inviting us into such a beautiful scenerio between lovers. Welcome to Destees. We'll be waiting to read more from you.
     
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    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The flow & feeling in this expression were beautiful. I had to read it more than once. A wonderful piece, thanks for sharing
     
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    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for all the love fam
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yo I love it, i felt that it had such true sexual meanings with considerations
    blacklove and bp
     
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    Whoa
    Poet welcome again
    This was lovely
    I really liked this
    beautiful pillow talk
    Much Love Poet
     
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    Cuddle On This

    "Let's talk about US" said she, as he imagined smoke ring diversions ~

    But I digress... Let's talk about the poem itself.


    SENSATIONAL!!!
     
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