Black Poetry : Lover's pillow talk

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  1. asimplepoet

    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My signicficant other sent me the him part of this poem and I was moved enough to write about it. It is sort of mushy but this just where I am at these days

    At the lovers dance completion
    As my heart slows down to its repetion
    My mind begins to take a walk
    And I whisper this sweet pillow talk

    (him)
    LIKE A BIRD SOARIN THROUGH THE AIR
    U MAKE ME FLOAT ON SILKY STRANDS OF THE WINDS HAIR,
    AS I LOOK INTO OPTICALS SO FAIR,
    AT HER RADIANT SOUL I CAN'T HELP BUT STARE
    HER EVERY MOVE AN EVERY SHUDDER I SHALL BE AWARE,
    UNTIL HER BODY SHIVERS FROM A SPASMS TEAR


    (her)
    Like the waves of the mighty sea
    U make me transcend through reality with glee
    Staring into the soul of thee
    Trying hard not to lose that which is me
    Sensations so overwhelming that I want to flee
    Yet I hold on till I can't see


    How wonderfully, amazing it must be
    That poetry is all I can utter to thee
    The magic of this moment I wish to keep
    So don't wake me from my sleep
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sleep on in this beauty of amazing moments
    i really love and enjoyed this piece
     
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    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you

    Once again thank u cuz for the love you always show
     
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    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    a real sweet, touching duet...it must be nice...great visuals, nice ending....
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yo i was really feelin dis poet
    i yet feel like dis sumtimes about dis guy
    but only in my dreams i can reach him and touch him
    very nice
    i luved it



    blackluv and bp
     
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