Quiet Poetry Lounge : My Apology

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by cojamalik, Feb 2, 2004.

  1. cojamalik

    cojamalik Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My black sister,
    how I have wronged thee!
    I inflicted pain on you,
    to temporarily empower me.
    Please, please forgive me,
    for now I can see
    past the jealousy that once blinded me.
    I took from you what I thought was gold.
    To find out he was rusty and old.
    I was a fool, and to foolish to see.
    T be with him would destroy everything good in me.
    Then stepped in the law of reciprocity
    For what he did to you,
    he also did to me.
    This my formal apology to thee!
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte scribing of forgiveness
     
  3. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was soo beautiful...much love and apology accepted. :heart:
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    to forgive is easy
    to understand and heal
    is harder...nice flow
    tight drop
     
  5. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was very original in concept
    love the perspective you brought
    very nice flow...
     
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    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NICE. that was very big of you to step up like that
     
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    very nice drop sis.feeling you on this..straight from the heart
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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