Black Poetry : APOLOGY from my love

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Speaking by tongue
    sweet things i'll do
    sweepin words of love
    from da heart is true

    Sometime wrong will spill
    words that leave a chill
    mouth fix to speak
    sometime in sentence peak

    My deep apology
    for lovin u
    for caring til i'm blue
    for caressin true
    and adoring u

    Your innocence is precious
    like a single dove
    your soul is pure
    as my warm love
    yet separates us
    like hand from glove

    I send my apology
    through each snuggle
    and your intoxicating cuddle
    how we lay in perfection
    feeling this sweet affection
    that guide our slumbers direction

    I leave my apology
    for all the comforting support
    and how i admire your essence
    i ask ya forgiveness to cherish
    so you know of my love

    That it will not fail
    always stay and never bail
    continue the journey swell
    and linger in heart i dewell
    keep faith on this trail
    of eternity

    my love is in deep confusion
    soulfully unexplainable illusion
    a heart of unbearable stain
    if i never hear ya name
    i so loveth u in enchanting desires
    u are my sun ray blissin fire

    So i sit alone beside this place
    searching seeking to trace
    and recount our love's fate
    where it's kept in spirits grace
    and hoover da bridge of glaze
    ur my Queen of rapture
    and da royality of loyality
    i now capture as your King
    i give my apology of lovin u.

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    Passionfruit005 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    apology from my love, this is a nice joint rite here, really
    keep doing ya thing, holla back passion
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thank u Passionfruit your warm words mean so much to me .
     
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    alright now feeling ya on this one flow on richy rich!!!!!!!!!!!:star: :kiss1: :nuts:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thank u Nevar often words are dropped and rarely picked up
    in expression so my Apology leakz ........................................
     
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    Come on ladies he trying to snuggle
    Show my Brother that apologetic Love
    The Love Doctor has spoken
    Much Love Brother
     
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    Hoping she won't become bound
    by the many tongues that she's using
    No apologies ever for the love felt
    only love that you're abusing
    For love felt and not really shown
    in all it is meant to be
    is like returning a gift from God
    just seems like a sin to me
    Love like this...a love that makes
    one break down and cry
    from its intensity...
    she sometimes can't help but wonder, why?
    Can the love not be touched because
    it's actually too strong and pure?
    Is there actually a thing as a love better left
    untouched? What excruciating pain to endure.
    And just when she believes she can cry no more
    a lonely tear still manages to leak out
    filled with the love that lives within her core
    Perhaps if he could taste this salty tear
    he'd truly understand what his apology is for....
    for it can never be for loving....
     
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    this apology i accept
    the words, the meaning hold depth

    i couldnt last one second, one hour
    your love i so want to devour

    you put a spell on me that last
    i willing to put behind our troublesome past

    i'm not willing to let you go
    there's something i want you to know

    i owe and Apology from Me to You!!!!!!!!:luvu:
     
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    Awesome piece Rich...but then you knew it would be, thanks for sharing it
     
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    dont, apologize....i'm diggin this piece
     
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