Black Poetry : Muse

[watzinaname]

Gee, deepy, you humble me so with this, very kind response, thank you. And great to see you flowing in haiku again...missed you there, you're such a talent.

 

[angelicsage]

If you were my eyes
You would envision streams
of mahogany and stardust dreams
adrift in the air, or so it seems.
If you could be my hands
You would feel the satiny touch
of creamy skin melting as I clutch
what I long to savor oh ... so much
Love this line...

For to be my heart
You would be swept away
in the pulsating frenzy every day
your spirit enters my realm this way
As a momentary replacement for my mind
Awestruck you would be to find
that waiting for our next chapter to unwind
is torture of the most unspeakable kind
and this one

All of this you would know
If you could step inside of me
and experience how my soul has been
captured inside this muse of poetry.

what can I say...I think I'm actually experiencing speechlessness...
it's a lot like being in the presence of royalty...sometimes you just have to hush and...

 

[watzinaname]

Sage, there you go humbling me once again. I appreciate you indicating which lines really stirred you....thank you so much sis.

 

[Bluewater]

very elegant my sister ...
wonderful flow
feeling of a classic mixed in richness
very lovely
Peace~N~Love
BlueWater

 

[watzinaname]

Thank you Blue, for your kind words. Nice to see you again.