Black Poetry : miracle water

[triniti424]

its miraculously STUPID smh lol
and u think people would have the sense to know better smh goodness smh lol
common sense jus aint common no more smh

 

[gempis]

BAM!!

Just hit us upside the head with it, j'hiah, cause it's crackin. Dig this.

 

[angelicsage]

til I'm BLUE

J'hiah...this was so tyte...

so real...

even more entertaining...

and so sad...because it's so true...

You have such a way of depicting...unethical situations in society through poetry...

I must say...you made me laugh ...with this line...though

"pay up, ***** pay up, ****!!"
where was l??
oh!
drink away your financial strife

til I'm BLUE

 

[watzinaname]

Folks preying on the weakness of the feeble minded looking for a miracle. I believe that there's a special place in he!! for these folks. Liked the way you brought this, makes ya shake your head.

 

[Bluewater]

i am liking your humor in this poem, and you are so right about how peolpe take advantage of other folks hope, nice drop brother
Peace
BlueWater