Black Poetry : 2 aisles from a miracle

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  1. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    2 aisles from a miracle
    I got a lil story
    Gather around children
    Lol


    Here’s a lil story I got to tell
    See, a young men busted his tail
    He knew in his mind he would fail
    He was shy
    She was hopeless
    A life in sadness
    But her monetary value was happy
    She goes home
    Alone in a room
    Trying to figure were is home
    She was in college
    She was a dime
    Everyone wanted to spend
    A rare coin many men wanted to spend and collect
    For a trophy
    But I wandered why her words were nobody knows me

    An all the time, she smiled
    But I could seen wrinkles
    In cheeks that wandered why she had everything a girl could dream
    But she crinkles
    In brinks of frustration
    And she says she a rebel to nation
    A nation in which she is waldo and love is that find
    She had that grind
    But unlike Mike Jones (who!!!) she had no shine

    However kids
    It gets better
    See she put on the same slippers
    And her favorite gloss
    She always seen a man
    But never thought to cross
    That road
    But what she didn’t long for
    Was longing for her
    And now she happy
    And understood love’s prophecy as of a year ago
    As if it were meant to happen
    Two aisles from a miracle

    roomtime vol. 1
    copyright daniel davis
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i was lovin this very crafted flow
    i want mo mo mo !!!! pt.2 please
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes that special one is right there, but you keep missing them somehow, looking in more obvious places. Nicely done.
     
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    Well put together
    Flow was on point
    Loving this piece
     
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    this was tight i love this joint flow on poet.:luvv:
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    when is part 2 comin?
    feelin' this.
     
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