Black Poetry : Men In BLACK

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, May 28, 2012.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Relegate my

    skin-tight hindsight

    Blackness eyes right

    Ever-present white lie re-write

    Coming with their flashlight neon light :picture:

    Reminiscent Third Reich dressed like

    I'm unwelcome...

    convolute a doldrums outcome

    stupefy the person

    God Loves ~


    Darryl Abdu Omari
    a.k.a. 1poetsought ~ you won't remember this
     
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    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Remember you make your own hindsight.
    True write!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well done this was on point
     
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    precious poet 1poetsought,

    rewriting is what some do... the only thing they can do. who cares?! keep bringing the truth through your originality.

    (smile)
     
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