Black Poetry : Lackin Spoken Skillz

[Randee]

a proud queen
raising little ones
career driven
hustling busy
always making time
to unwind
with those who keep it real
so whats the deal?

call me on the phone
ask me how my day was
before you yoyosexy
me instant text message me
wanna come over an do me
do me? whew, what a minute
I am tired of overplayed
and underpaid brothers
trying to hit it this way
I want dinner and movies
don't care who pays
time spent laughing
no camera phone passing
i am tired of game plays
I want conversation
titliation
booty shaking
real life quaking
time
not text messages
received in off hours
slanging codes
i don't know
from men i could
devour
a poetic woman
never lost for words
can't quite conjour
what seems to be the matter
with good ole fashion
chatter

 

[cocobutterskyn]

Hello Randee...

I loved it! I don't know if I've read any of your work in the past, but I do know I'm becoming a fan. Nice write!


MaddSistahlyLove!
Coco

 

[cherryblossom]

a proud queen
raising little ones
career driven
hustling busy
always making time
to unwind
with those who keep it real
so whats the deal?

call me on the phone
ask me how my day was
before you yoyosexy
me instant text message me
wanna come over an do me
do me? whew, what a minute
I am tired of overplayed
and underpaid brothers
trying to hit it this way
I want dinner and movies
don't care who pays
time spent laughing
no camera phone passing
i am tired of game plays
I want conversation
titliation
booty shaking
real life quaking
time
not text messages
received in off hours
slanging codes
i don't know
from men i could
devour
a poetic woman
never lost for words
can't quite conjour
what seems to be the matter
with good ole fashion
chatter

FANTASTIC!


I feel ya!


Whatever happened to some stimulating conversation!

Caress my mind...Tickle my imagination...Woo me with wonder.


EXCELLENT PIECE, here!

 

[$$RICH$$]

droppin da bomb ......i can relate

 

[LISTERSCRIBIN']

nicely, written. keep on scribin', it's wonderful. i'm feelin' it!