Black Poetry : Lackin Spoken Skillz

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Randee, Oct 20, 2009.

  1. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a proud queen
    raising little ones
    career driven
    hustling busy
    always making time
    to unwind
    with those who keep it real
    so whats the deal?

    call me on the phone
    ask me how my day was
    before you yoyosexy
    me instant text message me
    wanna come over an do me
    do me? whew, what a minute
    I am tired of overplayed
    and underpaid brothers
    trying to hit it this way
    I want dinner and movies
    don't care who pays
    time spent laughing
    no camera phone passing
    i am tired of game plays
    I want conversation
    titliation
    booty shaking
    real life quaking
    time
    not text messages
    received in off hours
    slanging codes
    i don't know
    from men i could
    devour
    a poetic woman
    never lost for words
    can't quite conjour
    what seems to be the matter
    with good ole fashion
    chatter
     
  2. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello Randee...

    I loved it! I don't know if I've read any of your work in the past, but I do know I'm becoming a fan. Nice write!


    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
  3. cherryblossom

    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    :toast: FANTASTIC!


    I feel ya!


    Whatever happened to some stimulating conversation!

    Caress my mind...Tickle my imagination...Woo me with wonder.


    EXCELLENT PIECE, here!
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    droppin da bomb ......i can relate
     
  5. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nicely, written. keep on scribin', it's wonderful. i'm feelin' it!
     
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