Black Poetry : Inside

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Inside this love
    a rapture born
    to ya heart
    never torn
    with my love
    i de vow
    and lay a forever
    smile
    kiss u wit all
    my joy
    take un motion
    to a flyte
    mesmerize u
    to a new light
    shower u wit
    respect
    dip low make u
    sweat
    once i'm inside
    for the long ride :eek:hmy:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Inside this love
    a nectar's bloom
    take me to
    your upper room
    lay a kiss
    upon my brow
    not tomorrow
    the time is now
    mesmerize me
    what a trance
    it was love
    at first glance
    let us glide
    and slide
    into the long ride.


    Sweet drop with some added spice...:)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    inside da flyte
    where rapture
    lay a heart calls
    out to play
    sending waves
    of care and
    motions to bare
    for the long ride
    once i'm inside

    thankz sistah for the drop
     
  4. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice piece man. Flow was on point. i wish you would have made this longer. Good job

    one ulv
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    big thankz indeed the next part will be sweeter longer and hotter
    but this week is about u Mind~$oul
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mesmerize me
    to a new light
    for the starz
    shine bright
    mesmerize me
    in the rapture
    like a new born baby
    love me tender
    capture my soul
    i de vow
    and lay forever
    within this mist wit you
    shower you wit
    respect
    dip low
    you wont regret it!!!!

    nice vibing flow on...QQ 4 mo...Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    open like the shine
    and enter a divine
    soulful rapture inside
    the mist to capture
    da warmth of it
    yessssssss thankz sistah Angel
     
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