Quiet Poetry Lounge : Holy Inside

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by abstract219, Mar 11, 2012.

  1. abstract219

    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    Sunbeams break and splinter

    Breathe life into this room

    Coltrane playing gospels

    on the radio

    Jasmine incense transmits
    lazy, wispy curls



    Thru the open window

    drinking in blue sky

    I am the Navy Blue Victor
    on this auspicious morn



    Sun bleeds light

    thru the curtains

    Early blossoms glisten

    I peel back the tangerine
    Bamboo chimes twitter




    This moment Im a dancer

    To Coltrane stanzas

    Mixing the Spring Elixirs and Exercises
    happy deep in my lair


    A gentle breeze,

    enticing thought

    of a perfect day in the world
    the scents of engagement



    Early, the telephone rings

    the world dangles affairs

    a string of rubies

    to engross and entangle


    (Coltrane repeats the theme)
    There is Holy Sun,

    Thank God for Holy Daylight,

    But I am whole at once

    Holy Inside.
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wholly holy.....and let the church snap, amen!
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wholly HOLY
    Guacamole

    :jumping:
     
  4. abstract219

    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    thank you much Alyce and 1poet for your responses. Always appreciated.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    just awesome all i can say in this unfoldly holy
     
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    But I am whole at once

    YESSSSS!!!
     
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