Black Poetry : In The Club

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  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In The Club

    This scum from the block legit hot like a cockpit in
    The sky whack I hijack brains and drop spits over again
    Flow lifts like snowdrifts leave cats frozen like ice cream
    Make bandana nitwits lick banana splits feed them advice keen
    Throw ball over a low wall and it bounce back whack
    Can’t slam dunk that **** junk oh **** it’s black crack
    Don’t snort that no love for drugs but thugs do sip champaign
    Across the globe roams, probe homes for sexy girls and damp dames
    Discover a lover by searching outfits and touching tits, steals
    A kiss and deals with bliss reveals the twist as love squeals

    In the club hot and snappy but not happy stuff slop and scrappy
    Like metal dang need a girl to proceed in this world or life sappy?
    Club an open space want to be smoking lace like Bill Dee
    Oh silly me, so boo let me git wit you and suck a *** or two Wee!
    MADD *** for tat gonna need doe to git that nothing is free
    Try be humble but guy I stumble across you ask for a small fee
    Aw girl got a plenty with twenty dollars now holler, OK
    No way that’s dirty because you’re thirty short just go away
    Aw girl give me a chance to live and romance you boo
    Let me make clear if you want cake dear let the green be seen
     
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    Drink wine and smoke, read minds of folk like propaganda
    With hints slyly sent highly rated messages like a hot commander
    View crews like spectators; South Central scrimmages are just
    Mental images like a kid seeing his dead mother, a lot
    Of misled brothers do crime, and the media don’t smother the plot
     
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    lOl...Second Part Was Madd Funny...I Was felling the flow of the First part
     
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    feeling you on dis here tyte wild drop bruh !
     
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    AfRiCaNrOoTs5o AND $$RICH$$ THANKS FOR THE PROPS FOR REAL YO
     
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    indeed showing love to a brutha
    as love be giving spreading it around
    to all the poet's
     
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    MADDRAPPER

    This was too funny.

    This piece reminds me of the clubs back in the 60's and 70's...Dolemite...Da Mack...:lol:

    The sad thing is that we are paying tribute to that era by living it over again...today. smh

    :thanks: for sharing

    :toast:
     
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    Monetary thanks for the props for real
     
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