Black Poetry : Hooked

[Kitana]

It's incredible how
my thoughts just now
ran riot through my head
when you walked
in the room~
my heart went boom
I started to shake
because just the sight
of you makes
my skin tremble
my nerves jangle~
and every bit of
control I have
gets all tangled up with
my basic instincts
turning me into
a quivering mess~
I have to confess
that I am a junkie
of the highest degree
hooked hopelessly
on you loving me~
you have the power
to devour me
simply with your presence~
elevate me to heights
that are heavenly
simply by whispering
to me lovingly~
and you send me
to the edge of insanity
whenever you touch me~
I stop breathing
when you smile at me
only to be revived
when you kiss me~
your love messes with
my ability
to function normally~
in short My Love
I adore you

(c) nfn 2003

 

[1poetsought]

Words Every Man Wants to Hear

Say it again, and again! Great work! 1poetsought

 

[amberly]

Very Nice Flow, like this lots!


am

 

[$$RICH$$]

u know i really loved this here .....say it again to me !

 

[Kimdricka]

girl now thats how you stroke a male's ego, epecially when you truly mean it. very nice work, poet. i felt that.

Kim