Black Poetry : Hooked

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Kitana, Feb 10, 2003.

  1. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's incredible how
    my thoughts just now
    ran riot through my head
    when you walked
    in the room~
    my heart went boom
    I started to shake
    because just the sight
    of you makes
    my skin tremble
    my nerves jangle~
    and every bit of
    control I have
    gets all tangled up with
    my basic instincts
    turning me into
    a quivering mess~
    I have to confess
    that I am a junkie
    of the highest degree
    hooked hopelessly
    on you loving me~
    you have the power
    to devour me
    simply with your presence~
    elevate me to heights
    that are heavenly
    simply by whispering
    to me lovingly~
    and you send me
    to the edge of insanity
    whenever you touch me~
    I stop breathing
    when you smile at me
    only to be revived
    when you kiss me~
    your love messes with
    my ability
    to function normally~
    in short My Love
    I adore you

    (c) nfn 2003
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Words Every Man Wants to Hear

    Say it again, and again! Great work! 1poetsought
     
  3. amberly

    amberly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very Nice Flow, like this lots!


    am
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u know i really loved this here .....say it again to me !
     
  5. Kimdricka

    Kimdricka Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    girl now thats how you stroke a male's ego, epecially when you truly mean it. very nice work, poet. i felt that.

    Kim
     
  6. epiphany

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    Scribe them lyrics!....Kitana,
    I'm lovin your love poems...
    keep flowin....beautifully done.

    btw, thanx for the encouragement....it's nice to be home!


    Epiphany:heart:
     
  7. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    go head on

    gurl and do the dayum thang and keep strokin






    One
     
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    WOOOWEEE!!!
     
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