Black Poetry : green funk...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by wildflower7, Jun 29, 2001.

  1. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    like i don't get how we used to have sex
    whenever
    wherever
    and now getting you inside me is accomplished almost
    never
    i know i don't look the same but you say
    i'm so beautiful
    and we ain't usin birth control so you say
    girl you must be tryin to get pregnant
    man, you KNOW i ain't
    and you said you ain't cheatin
    i have no reason to believe otherwise
    so i'm confused as to why
    i can't make love to you and we're married so
    i can't make love to my old standby
    am i being punished for
    marrying?
    or simply for marrying
    you?
     
  2. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whew!

    Hey im really sorry you are in this sort of a position. you normally hear about men goin through this type of thang...

    heart felt scribe
    Reas
     
  3. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yo flower

    you got to make your life happy
    cause if you ain't who gonna do it for ya?

    so take the exhale

    and get on with your fun

    cause nobody don't like to be stuck

    Peace From Da So'ja
     
  4. shaneak

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    Tell it like it is?

    Girl you remember that song. I good friend told me...You ain't living if you aint happy and if he slacking and ain't trying to compromise...well...You do whats best for you. Girl, its all gravy...Cause you will be aight regardless....
     
  5. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You know that you are one gorgeous woman but stress and fear does sometimes freeze the strongest of men. It is one thing to have children and another thing to have children full time. Take some time and remind my black brother of the secretes you hold for him and him alone, and if dat don’t work slap dat bro into a state of delirium and when he comes two maybe he will be his old self.
    much luv sis
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    SADLY SAD

    NO LOVE //BROKEN VOWS
    SPLIT HEART//BETRAYED
    HURT//PAIN//
    IS IT ONE BE OF SHAME ??
    IS IT THAT SELF CANT SEE
    IS IT THAT THE LOVE IS GONE
    WHY U CANT LOVE ME IN BED
    IS IT THAT U WANT ME TOO LOSE
    MY HEAD
    U SAID U LOVE ME
    I MARRIED U
    NOW WHAT U THINK I SHOULD DO
    LEAVE U
    NAHHHHH!!
    FINE A BED BUDDY
    NAHHHHH!!
    WELL I'LL LET IT BE A MYSTERY!

    I MUST SAY THIS HAPPEN TO US
    ALL KEEP YA HEAD UP AND MIND FREE
    AND TRUST ME HE'LL COME UPON U
    LOVIN DES PIECE
    A WRITE FROM DA HEART......................
     
  7. YeshuJah

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    a heads up piece

    this **** is happening to many couples for real. It seems as if marriage does funny things to otherwise good relationships sometimes, but a lot of women seem to slack off as soon as they get married. Some gain weight and do nothing about it, some stop fixing their hair or wearing makeup.. you know? lil **** like that could send a brother outside. My advice. Bring your game like ya used to bring it before the ring, maybe then you'll get the thing. Real piece though.
     
  8. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seven....


    **** sis....

    i hope this is one of those situations where
    everyone thinks you're talking about yourself...
    but you really aren't. :)

    either way it was expressed eloquently...
    & it was felt... completely!

    One.
    SunShyne~
     
  9. j'hiah

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    i agree with with everyone esp. Yeshujah.
    however both men and women change some for the better some for the worse.
    i don't believe you're being punished for marrying (him).
    but only you know the intricacies of the relationship you are in,
    so the best judgement comes from you (and him).

    *bowing*
    you' ll make it

    jh.
     
  10. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i totally agree with everyone else before me...uhmmm, very well written, i must say.
     
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