Black Poetry : Behind my Mirror (final view pt.III)

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Silently i stood in place tracing the essence
    of an reflected love abound through my mirror
    visional maze, mask a beauty a face of blur
    I ask unto the cracking line who art thou !
    for days i await the messager my body arch
    my heart beatin in rapid pace my soul seem
    empty yet filled in glory of a love i yet know

    I ask again do she not know my heart
    and the love i sought for the tame of
    her beauty & joy my soul weeps & lone
    for her and do she not feel my rapture
    for inside i've taste her essence of love
    through this reflectional vision inside my
    mirror that hangs at half staff upon the
    cold west wall, soon i hear a whisper.

    Let not the night go unto day that she
    will face u in the temple and at the alter
    ur see thy Queeneth the memory of her
    will linger forever and grow as a flower on
    your heart she will weep in the final hour
    her name will flash in lights , she know of
    heart and love and offers her's she feel the
    rapture in her dip and compromise unto u
    let not your body limb .

    O' Mirror mirror
    tell me again is it real , will i sin ! is it true love
    from deep within can it be a visional illusion trend
    what is this my heart now in
    i've praised her far too long and sing this same song
    am i right am i wrong tell me mirror what's really going on
    before u answer tell her what my heart now say

    I've kissed her vision a million tymes
    felt her radiant love shine divine
    i've carried her cross the ocean floor
    and walk wit her through every door
    i bring my heart of love and give my
    soul of comfort i share my light & caresses
    upon the due respect as i honor her worth
    i'll listen intently and grieve at her side
    i'll lay down to be her bridge & ambition ride
    if she will i'll take her in flyte protect her
    day and night fulfill desires so she never
    scream passion coz last night beside me
    she was and we both wanted this love but
    she gave me something more it was Harmony
    I know we have this deeply compatibility of
    love inside this final view of reflection i know
    i loveth and she will be my beloveth soulmate

    There no more to say , cut the lights off and
    rest and your love will carry from the mirror to
    your memories into a spool of foreverness and
    leave a blessing forth of love & extreme rapture
    the fire burns she's near u have seven days to
    unscramble the mystery of your beauty as the
    reflection fade out only letters remain upon this
    stain smoke glass :luvv:

    somebody help me decode the truth behind my mirror .

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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You've painted quite a beautiful misty, mystical vision inside the mirror of your mind. I'm not sure who will help you solve the mystery, for the answer lies within. Intriguing write.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz sista watz surely the answer is deeper in itself and the mask of reflection
     
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    Poetic Justice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    See, now you just take the reader on such emotional ride, i love this story, you sure know how to keep us in suspense.
    Good work :read: :read: :read: :read: :read: :read: :read: :read: :read: :smokin: :smokin: :smokin: :smokin: :smokin: :smokin: :smokin: :smokin: :smokin: :smokin: :smokin: :smokin: :smokin: :smokin: :smokin: :smokin: :smokin:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thank u Poetic Justice , i love mysteries and learning how to craft it .
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    within you find the truth but yet have to be ready for the blessing that the mirror have offered...the heart is true and the love grows within the bond is made....digging this is there a sequel or what i love when you take my mind into your scribe...Angel
     
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    pin pointing it to the max sista Angel there always a remix in the making
    Thankz for the decoded visit to a mirror mystery of love ........................
     
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