Black Poetry : Behind The Mirror (pt.II)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Feb 27, 2005.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    Smoke grey cloudy faze
    she was a face to amaze
    secretly afix image bliss
    mirror ! mirror ! tell me this
    do she know me well
    and how my love is spelled
    can she dewell in my life
    com'mo mirror shine ya light

    Mirror darken again
    softly spoken in trend
    she know of u dearly
    and carve yo love heavenly
    if u compromise your heart
    she will come from the dark

    O' my what is this
    that have me deep in a twist
    she glow like never before
    offer something ur never know
    her beauty is in her speech
    and intently i listen when she
    speak in divine tongue
    she kiss the page and make
    my body crave

    Through this reflection of love
    is a sign from heaven above
    giving me a lift and a rise
    to a new life suprise as i look
    inside the mirror i see the untouch
    and feel the unbelievable passion
    of a humble sweet affection
    guiding my heart directional motion
    rockin me like waves of an ocean

    her reflection become clear
    my soul no longer fear
    closer i move to da mirror
    to partake a kiss how i lone
    just for this is my mind set
    in illusion visional twist
    tell me please what is this !

    She perky , i'm feelin jerky
    drippin in sweat wondering
    if she know how i love her so
    she live past pain and know
    cracked emotions she offer
    body & soul i bring heart devotion
    if this reflection continue i'll set
    of a deep explosion

    Look at her as she fade
    in her pumps dressed in
    red glaze/ fading to the place
    where i lay my head
    on my pillow in my bed
    she is a dream & divine
    do she know my love
    is never blind and i know it
    this tyme to love is a crime
    when i feel away for a while
    all i see is her shinning smile
    when she near i feel a freeze
    help me ! help me babe please

    feel me later in pt.III..............

    :hearts1: :hearts1: :hearts1: :hearts1:
    MIRROR MIRROR .. :ilu:
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 16, 2003
    Messages:
    2,781
    Likes Received:
    15
    Occupation:
    College Student, Bookstore Clerk
    Location:
    ...down south...
    Ratings:
    +16
    love it...love it...love it...
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    most humbled sista LovelyG thankz a million from above

    stay tune as the mystery continues .
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Oct 4, 2003
    Messages:
    16,340
    Likes Received:
    114
    Location:
    Northeast
    Ratings:
    +122
    Mirror mirror tell me true, is this what true love can do? Still loving the concept and description of vision. Yea, I'll be waiting for part three. :)
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Aug 26, 2003
    Messages:
    12,660
    Likes Received:
    191
    Location:
    somewhere ova da rainbow....
    Ratings:
    +219
    love have a way of twisitng you up settin you high this was smooth the way you laid it...unanswered but yet love is answered....keep on looking in that mirror for it got more to say...maybe a name...or maybe she will come within a dream and speak.....Angel
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    Thankz watz for the visit and love sis yes behind the mirror is true love i know
    stay tune to the final view

    Thankz Angel for the supporting love from the mirror and just maybe a name or face
    will show self in the final view of reflection .
     
  7. Poetic Justice

    Poetic Justice Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    May 2, 2003
    Messages:
    204
    Likes Received:
    3
    Occupation:
    Analyst
    Location:
    detroit
    Ratings:
    +3
    :gossip: In the heart of souls there are no explanations, This was such a beautiful read, inspiring and fun, with a soultry feel.
     
  8. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    thank u ever so much Poetic Justice .....
    stay tune for the final view of pt.III
     
  9. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    May 5, 2003
    Messages:
    4,020
    Likes Received:
    32
    Occupation:
    strength coach
    Location:
    Seattle, WA
    Ratings:
    +32
    This is my fave line:

    her beauty is in her speech



    $$RICH$$, you know what love means, doncha baby.
     
  10. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    hey gempis thankz sis , well let's say i did my homework
    the final view pt.III now abound do visit this mirror mystery
    of love's reflection again thankz a million
     
Loading...