Black Poetry : BeHind my Mirror

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Secretly i vision deep
    inside my mirror creep
    facing off making leap
    to what i see sweet
    so divine it sweep me

    behind the reflection
    mirrored glass was a
    love my heart couldn't
    pass but my mind asked
    can it last or is this an
    illusional maze a reflection
    my body crave just a lookin
    blaze a trans of double

    spoken softly in a cracked tone
    my brutha let ya heart roam
    what u see deep in me is the
    love ya soul seek , she is a hourglass
    breakable if u pass , this reflection
    is of ya heart and the true soul
    hold it in grasp surely through tyme
    love will last

    To my suprise a vision molded
    she was as beautiful as gold
    her smile was a radiant gleam
    and she walk with a swayin theme
    lips like fire & ice i had to look in
    deep twice and she was dressed
    in some fine pumps , shoelace
    low cut top this vision had me hot
    a split side jean dress now my
    heart was ready to confess
    pop lockin and nails like a cat
    inside dis mirror breakin in sweat
    she was moist and wet this one
    i'll never forget

    behind the mirror is mystery love
    something ya mind can hug from
    an visional trans and a heart felt
    plan she was as perfect as day
    and passionate as night that set
    me off into a delightful twist
    so i said mirror , mirror who is this

    what it said was !
    i am and know she is a bliss & twist
    her name is .............shhhhhhhhhh!!
    let's keep her a mystery miss. :donttell: :hearts3:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol....you got me with the end
    captured me deep wanting to read
    more but you paused so the mystery still
    goes untold...like how you posed this
    what an mental lay you have drop


    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz u know me i'm full of suprise and mental twisted
    lol see Angel i'm one of the images u see look in ya mirror
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I enjoyed taking a peek inside the mirror's mysterious vision, makes me want to see even more, perhaps there's a part 2? I liked this creative twist.
     
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    thankz watz u know me i always have a sequel in stor
    waiting in the wings .......
     
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    Of course you have a sequel in store - I'd expect nothin less. :jump: This piece is dope, baby.
     
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    lol thankz gempis u know me well sis ..
    it won't be right without one stay tune !
     
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    reflecting the reflection of love through the mirror this image i see ...
     
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    i liked the mystery of this piece...tyte...
     
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    thankz a million sista LovelyG feel me in pt II
    near u and the mystery continues ................
     
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