Black Poetry : 3 states.............(Heat 4 u mothers)

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  1. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    3 States of Being

    Turn the lights down low...

    You exist all within my mind,
    My every thought revolving,
    Tasting, kissing the picture of you
    That swirls forever in my memory,
    Even now as I face you,
    I dance you through my fantasies,
    All my dreams trailing along as we dance.
    I remember running across Egyptian sands with you,
    Dream of our future each time I hear your name.
    All that I know is encompassed in your smile,
    The motions of your body,
    The lingering taste of your kiss in my mind,
    And I am lost in thoughts of you,
    Never seeking a way out.
    Your existence,
    Locking into mine now,
    Irrevocably a part of me,
    Being my dreams,
    Leading my thoughts,
    Drowning my mental even as I stretch out to you.


    Turn the lights down low......

    Let me talk only to your soul with my soul,
    Speaking in Love,
    To the one who meets with me on Heaven’s plateau,
    Weaving a living tapestry on the loom
    Of our emotions, the thread our longing.
    My heart calls your name in all the languages of God,
    Shouting my Love across creation,
    The thunder that splits the night
    And holds the moon in our regard
    As we move soulwardly higher,
    We tempest of spirit be,
    Storming as we look within each other,
    Talking only with our souls,
    Repeating the words our mouths haven’t learned
    But our bodies want to teach.
    Speak to me in Love,
    The voice of the essence of our carnality,
    Our passion, all the mental verses
    That have led us to where we now stand,
    My Verbstick seeking the living poem
    Flowing form the well of your world,
    Word by word, drop by drop.


    Turn the lights down low...

    Know me, know my body,
    My flesh shining in the dark
    As I reach for you,
    Caressing your perfume with my nose,
    your voice with my longing ears,
    Before I ever feel the heat in your touch
    I strain my eyes to see your soul dancing
    To the music of the shadows that bow around us.
    I long for physicality,
    bodies in the rhythm of Gods,
    ambrosia flowing, wine pressed
    with every kiss, every longing glance
    in the moonlight, under starlight
    all that I’ve been dreaming of,
    sacrificed as we cast our soma
    and rock in embrace.
    Know,
    Bathe me in every drop of your wetness
    As we shudder together,
    As the spasms begin,
    As we touch the edge and spin,
    We burn in each other.
    Know my body,
    Know its touch as it calls for you,
    As it stretches forward to pierce this tinted air
    And pierce in turn your sweetness,
    Know every touch, every inch
    As I slide onto you, into you,
    Arching to touch you deep,
    Where it hurts and then feels so good.

    Caramelpython
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jawdrop: this wow
    the beauty of this
    tight very tight....
    after i get ova the speechless
    thing i be back :wink:

    peace
    angel
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So expressively written, loving mind, body, and soul, you crafted this one like the sculptor you are.
     
  4. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alluring

    Mesmerizing

    Magnetic

    Breathtaking

    Stunning

    Intoxicating

    Intoxicating

    Intoxicating


    Intoxicating

    did I mention....Intoxicating


    You seem to have just sat back...and let your soul craft this beauty...
    it's warm...but soft and full of passion. Very well written...WOW...it was def'
    worth the wait to embark upon a new voyage with the Python...leading
    me to ucharted isles...Brother...you worked this...beyond measure...

    I didn't want to return... :sand:
    This was Art...



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  5. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Did you say...turn the lights down low??? ...I'm running round this house with my :uzi: ...and anything that even look like it might hold some light...I'm shooting down :huh:
    and another thing...no more :nono: :court: for you buddy :nono: ...no more a tall :wink: ...This one caught my heart off-guard, it went :jumping: all over the dang place..."whew"...*smh* and *sighing*...
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :blush:
    ok ok i am back....
    this one took my breath
    captured me in moment
    you have out done ya self...
    whateveryou doing
    keep on doing.....loved it
    i my be back this is like
    wow...do what you can do when you do it....ok din :spinstar:

    Angel came back
    Peace
     
  7. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow:flame:
    now
    it is love like this
    within your lfow
    lights turned low
    feeling that heat
    is how we became
    Mother's
    my goodness*smiling*
    Gosh Python
    hugs and love to you (((((((((CARMEL))))))
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  8. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whew!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Python, Python
    whew! :jawdrop:

    Brutha, where do I begin?????
    This was indeed off the chain, masterful, and wonderful creation.
    Whew! :jawdrop:

    Ummmm, Brutha
    had a sistah soundin like Forrest Gump ova here.....lolol
    This was on point Python, you did ya thang, and did it well.
    whew! :jawdrop:
    :heart: Nita Mae :heart:
    Now you can call me whew Smurff :jawdrop:





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  9. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    str8 awesome love here tyte to the max whoaaaaaaaaaa!!
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    back again:lol:
    cant stay out of this
    one....this was tight....

    as you read you can feel the love down the page...
    something out of a book this was great
    Python....love it
    i guess ya can tell
    shoot it been so long.....drop some more on us..
    i likes reading ya.... :wink:
    Peace
    Angel
     
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