Poetry Critiques : P-resident of the Unlightened States*

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  1. AARONSCROWELL

    AARONSCROWELL New Member MEMBER

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    How long before we figure out what's truly wrong...
    And whose existence is at stake~
    Will another set of buildings have to fall...
    Onto some more of "ya'll"
    Or will the ground have to open up
    And swallow "us" like the 17th century madras earthquake!!??

    Now another generation finds itself confronted by this...
    Another meglamaniac attempting to force feed others..his s**t~
    This jackass and his cronies...
    The whole kit and kaboodle of over officious phonies~
    Is trying to lead us into another world war...
    And no "one" really seems to mind what has taken place thus far!!

    You're either with me or against me..was his cry and hew...
    Well, the only way I could be more against whatever it is you
    Supposedly stand for..would be for me to be split in 2 (4,6,8)!~
    There are elders whose knowledge of past global transgressions...
    Would serve us well to be apprised of..telling us in detail~
    What things were like in germany before and during ww2!

    How hitler had carte blanche to do the things he was allowed to do...
    About how it came to pass..that a wheelbarrow full of d-marks~
    Couldn't buy a loaf of bread...
    And what of his jackbooted henchmen..just doing their job~
    Invading other countries..attempting to convert the populace...
    Either conform to our way of thinking..or die like slobs!!

    Delivering the ultimatum by bomb or by gun
    Then feigning surprise when they didn't all turn and run
    Were they also referred to as insurgents by gum????

    Arronscrowell

    to be continued
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well stated and versed .
     
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