Black Poetry : while you were sleeping

[redlady]

i looked upon your face
while you were sleeping
i traced the outline of your lips
and with my finger tip
i felt the familiar contours of your face
and i sighed
what am i gonna do with you
how am i going to make you see
that i can take on this world
if you will only love me

i long to sit on your lap
and kiss your lips
and let it flow until i move my hips
i want to moan and i want to cry
i want you to take me someplace high
and someplace far and far away

and when we return
i want you to say...that was good girl
i can't get enough
but that's just a fantasy
that i conjoured up
while you are sleeping
because the reality is so barren
while you are awake

 

[amberly]

sometimes fantasies are all we have, when reality hits, its no joke, Im feeling your words here , nicely written

 

[$$RICH$$]

yes indeed Amberly said it so well to sum it up !
nice flow RED

 

[Monetary]

redlady

Very nice...it put me in the moment.

I too fantasied of having someone...but they weren't asleep. Hell, they weren't even at the house.

You must drop this piece in voice chat.

for sharing.

 

[serenti-poet]

lol Monetary same herre I really like this I fine myself doing the same thing while he is sleeping.... newayz peace and blessins keep flowin oh yeah beautiful poem.