Black Poetry : U.S. (United Souls)also in peaceful lounge

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticlyspeakin, Sep 5, 2004.

  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Our names are engraved in trust
    Fate is our forever - heaven was made for us
    God handed us the torch, so of course we'll carry it
    You were made to be my goddess and I was made to take u away in my chariot
    We connect where art meets perfection
    Shielded by faith - our premonitions are out protection
    As we mold our mentals we build a foundation
    on intamacy, honesty, and communication
    I celebrate our unity like I celebrate Easter
    Because only a woman of your quality holds angelic features
    My heart beats your name and yor love fills its capacity
    Our book of love often reminds me of a rhapsody
    When I kiss you I taste eternal bliss
    Lips-
    made of promise
    juices of nectar
    You're my rock and I am your protector
    We are the equation that equals up to devotion
    Our magical connection makes up the secret potion
    Well... thats how it used to be...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    it how it can still be
    dis was tyte ur pen off da hook lately i love it
    speak on child !!
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    aaww "that's how it use to be"
    didn't expect that..the flow was moving so nicely
    and bang...you surprised me..
    I like that...
     
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    Like deepy, the end caught me off guard. Relationships can end that way, something that catches you by surprise. I liked the way you brought this poet.
     
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    Ditto...my response from
    the quiet peacful lounge...

    Still feeling this sister...
    Nice flow
     
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    Beautiful, sweetie. LOVE to see your work on the page. :heart:
     
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    mmmm :read: I believe its time i venture more into the quiet lounge :) this was really smooth sista :)
     
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    smooth work..nice to read you again
     
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