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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticlyspeakin, Sep 4, 2004.

  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Our names are engraved in trust
    Fate is our forever - heaven was made for us
    God handed us the torch, so of course we'll carry it
    You were made to be my goddess and I was made to take u away in my chariot
    We connect where art meets perfection
    Shielded by faith - our premonitions are out protection
    As we mold our mentals we build a foundation
    on intamacy, honesty, and communication
    I celebrate our unity like I celebrate Easter
    Because only a woman of your quality holds angelic features
    My heart beats your name and yor love fills its capacity
    Our book of love often reminds me of a rhapsody
    When I kiss you I taste eternal bliss
    Lips-
    made of promise
    juices of nectar
    You're my rock and I am your protector
    We are the equation that equals up to devotion
    Our magical connection makes up the secret potion
    Well... thats how it used to be...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis here hit home i love it
    u.s
    united souls
    us
    this made me stop and feel
    da full depth of it thankz for dis one
    awesome write
     
  3. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow sister...
    it is so good to read you again...
    it's like every time you drop in
    your poetry has risen to a higher level
    but yet pulls you to depths deep
    enough to crush one's lungs...
    whoa...

    this was mm mm mm... :spinstar:

    Blaze on sister...I'm basking in this vibe!
     
  4. nabraska

    nabraska Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your flow and choice of words was amazing on this one!!! :jawdrop:

    Thank you for sharing this one!!
     
  5. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The Love Poem Master has struck again! Nobody does it like you, girl. Angelicsage is right - it's great to witness your growth as a writer. You just keep gettin better and better. I give u daps.
     
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