Black Poetry : United Snakes ~

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Apr 19, 2006.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Unchain our hearts ~ (people growing apart)

    And we got jobs as venomous as "old boss"

    United Snakes had better LISTEN hard

    We ain't gone take another MasterCard

    Or be slaves NO mo'

    Bought or sold...

    I'm really feelin' this prose

    Un-chain-our-hearts

    Evil linked to the dark

    Opposed to GOD

    Beneath our feet

    From the start

    I cast you out

    In the name of HIM

    BACK to the Pits of Hell

    BEDEVILING...

    Let you crawl in sin

    You're FIRED again!


    Darryl Abdu Omari :flamet:
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2006
     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yea man

    thanks for letting them know

    those who can't understand the first 4 lines of your piece

    either need to be re-educated or we can't use them

    this is the real

    you know i'm feeling this
     
  3. black_soul

    black_soul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hot drop many people don't realize the hold that life can put on you sometimes making you a slave without even knowing it. thank you for sharing can't wait to read more.
     
  4. Khasm13

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    snakes alive
    this was real talk...not no jive!!!

    one love
    khasm
     
  5. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    datz wut im talkin bout
    yo im feelin dis piece, it got mad fire my bratha
    wut u said was on the realz
    so flo on


    blackluv and bp
     
  6. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Smoke 'em out ~

    Peace
     
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