Black Poetry : Twisted

[queentswana]

The "lust" that we sometimes cling to is amazing...
while love sits hopelessly...needlessly blazing.
wonderful piece, and keep reaching for the love.

 

[caramelpython]

Short but the message was on point! I enjoyed this flow and the feelings were true!

 

[naujae]

i like this it's very emotional
or maybe I'm just very emotional today

 

[HODEE]

This is very nice. Twisted is a great flow. I have been on the outside waiting while my love went off with another. Only to be hurt and of course I was there to help her recover. After she felt better, she left me again. I love her so much we will always be friends. Sometimes I feel like a revolving door. She is special.. I am her core.

This is why she loves me, she is exploring the world. I know one day I hope it isn't long she really becomes my girl.