Black Poetry : Twisted

[hisili]

You thought he loved you
he didn't even know you
he knew you were fine as hell
his soul he would sell
just to take your cherry
he lied, said you he would marry
now he's done his deed
and for you he has no need.

Nothing but tears and prayers asking why....
pour your soul to me saying you want to die

But you have no idea how twisted I was
feelings of sorrow for u and glee for me cuz
I knew I loved you so much more
had feelings for you from deep within my core
always wanting this, but not to hurt you
and swear when your mine I will be true.​

 

[$$RICH$$]

twisted affects of love flowing deep inside where true love reside feelin dis scribe

 

[MzBlkAngel]

this si a nice scribe of true feelings enjoyed it

 

[angelicsage]

Wow...I love the way
this piece gives you the
feeling of being right inside
of the persons mind...as if
the reader were thinking
those thoughts him or herself...

This was truly heartfelt...
truly...

Loved this immensly...
Sage

 

[hisili]

although I feel I had to cut this short im glad yall appreciated it, when I find tha notebook I originally wrote this down on I might edit it to itz full length,..... think Dr. K may be grading that folder, but I still luv tha luv.