Black Poetry : Paranoid

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  1. Mikha'el

    Mikha'el Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ok so im at the barbershop at this very moment n feel a poetic urge so...Here I GOOOO!


    Below the depths lie sublimal thoughts of the Crazed

    Fear resonates along the interstate to the tresurary

    Where transactions to my soul are commenced

    Run something like icy hot seems the therometer is broken

    And I've jumped into the vortex out of fear of lost control

    Of what is uncontrollable the way in which the river flow

    But the thing its controlled but im not the one with the joystick

    And with this acknowledgement insanity emerges the result of sanity's abolishment

    All of this for the fear of losing what I feel is love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Just da thoughts make it wild n' crazy
    tyte quick drop poet !
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    really like your drop poet...
     
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    Mikha'el Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks y'all
     
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