Black Poetry : Discernment Paranoid

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    The pain etched across her face
    all alone no helpm in sight of thee
    so mirrored mines , i hear da voices
    echo, beckoning as i recognize
    the presence of her bearing da full
    complete despair , wicked tones of
    whispers through da night
    I am the hunted one on the run
    though dissimilar we also was the
    obviously two sharing as strangers
    from da picket fence lay da freedom
    she pose the unconditional yet very
    forbidden frame of pride i knew it
    was only a crazy dream like a distorted
    illusion but locked inside i knew it was real
    from opposite position across da room
    holding fast to our secret she open
    the book to read me my life
    our eyes simultaneously welled with tears
    the fear of tomorrow was closer and
    yesterday was beyond the reasons
    nothing prepared me for our embrace
    yet had a sense of rightness i'd recognized
    stuck in fear i comfort her soul gracefully
    and cover her in the warmth of my arms
    my heart beats rapidly
    but i gave my all to asure her she was in
    the blessing of a complete suit of armor
    from GOD
    relaxing in the tides deep fear release
    and the sins river through da tears
    she felt the harmony of faith & happiness
    and reality from paranoid corruption
    just a little lovin , embracin , caressin
    and words of comfort makes the moment
    right as i fly away

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    2004 $R
     
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    ScorpioStylez Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This right here was tight you have alot of skilly brother Rich :teach:

     
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    And as it be...it took you, to save the day, or in better words ...the heart. well written
     
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    Thank you very much Scorpio i try to bring it to the reader
    and leave way to understand my mental & heart as it flow

    Thank you Queentswana , I had to clash into it to bring forth
    the harmony and close to a myth only lay in the mind
     
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    oh man this was tight
    the vibe that ran through it...wow
    love it....this is goin up on the wall...
    int the gold frame..this was tight and all that
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    thank u BlkAngel the creativity juices flowin in my vains
     
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    Sometimes something can occur that is so profound that we may not think that we are ready for it. But there are no dress rehearsals in life, and God is there to walk us through. And thank goodness for that. That river is certainly running deep, Rich. Well felt scribe.
     
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    thank u sistah watz just bringing the other side of my pen out
    nice reply
     
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    This is an awesome piece of work from the Master behind the words ! I find it extremely interesting to the point I was so caught up I couldn't even remember the title however I remember...the sweet release and of course I'm assuming when you flew away it wasn't by yourself because more than likely...you took that sweetie ! Uh ?

    One Love In All That's Real

    Sheryl aka CC :toast:
     
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    hey thankz sistah , happy to hear ya pen speak sheryl
    i flew alone seeking da one !

    Love & hope of warmth
    peace sis.....
     
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