Black Poetry : Paranoid....

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  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    boarder-line personality pychotic
    midnight maniac in need of a mans
    touch in order to make her feel like more of a woman...
    her emotions coastin on the dry sex appeal,
    and cheap liquior from the corner sto'
    makin voice's in her head steal her sanity....
    (beauti is n the eye of the beholdah though)

    ever step she took would make
    ther footprints scream and writhe
    in pain....:nuts:
    burden's crowded her brain...
    cuz she think the sky is fallin
    (her soul was fallin, and fallin, and fallin...)

    could she see into the
    raindrops that catch on her eyelashes
    and find purity?
    her foolishness made her think it was in EVERY mans
    dick, though it was used as a weapon
    to stab her/kill her instead of helping her find the light...

    fingers chringin against the wallz..
    scratching to try to find a way out of
    this omnipresent Hell that surrounds her
    cuz she wishes for a new day to come and
    wisk her away.....
    (*yyawwwnnn* finish it latah, bout to take a nap nah..lol)
    -story

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  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Napping is a good thing...then wake up refresh and start over...I'm sure u will see the bigger picture.
    luv at ya ...queentswana
     
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    Hey! that aint right Princess!
    Had my head movin and vibin
    with the flow then
    you cut out on me!
    I'll be back!
    From what I heard
    I know this piece is
    HOT!!!!!!!!
     
  4. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol thanks ya much purple...i gots love fo ya...jus woke up...

    queen i'm sure i will thanks for dropping by...
    :heart:
    -story
     
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    You've captured us so far, waiting for more.
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    don't worry i will, thanks for droppin by...
    :heart:
    -story
     
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