Black Poetry : Never Drive When You're Emotionally Drunk

[blakverb]

Cindy,

I'm impressed by your insight into this piece. You are correct this is a melacholy/sad piece. There other thing that you mentioned is also eerily close. I think you are the first one to pick up the mood of this piece. This is not really a "I fell in love happy piece" but a piece of sorrow. But, you know the that's the joy of poetry. Due to our experiences or what have you we read things with a different frame of reference...making our assertions on a piece neither right nor wrong. Thanks again.

one love, blak

 

[MsDLite]

yeah!

...love the title!

awesome...keep 'em coming!

 

[honeyluv]

very beautiful but put that bottle down
taste my honey and drive to me ........

 

[Desert Storm]

My Badd!

Yeah I know now that I looked at again but that last person who replied was one_love and that was all that I looked at then. So I thought it was one_love but when I looked at it again and saw you wrote I felt dumb. Sorry,verb,I'm real sorry I know you're a guy. I just made a mistake. Hope you don't take any offense. Keep smilin.
Desert Storm

 

[Hypnotize]

Emotionally -
" You could learn a lot from a dummy " -

but no one ever really learns.

Love is still at large.