Black Poetry : Naked

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticly_yours, Mar 29, 2004.

  1. poeticly_yours

    poeticly_yours Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I just wanna see you completely nude
    let me see the private parts of you
    past those gator boots
    or Armani suits
    I wanna see what lies underneath
    take off everything
    whats hiding behind those shiny things
    beyond your bling
    beneath those jeans
    I wanna see your assets
    beyond your expensive glasses
    let me know what desserts
    lie beneath your shirt
    forget about your brand name clothes
    I'd rather see what's in your soul
    so baby just get naked
    cause every part of you i'm checking
    just to get the chance to see
    the man that you could really be
    I wanna see the truth
    so take it off so i can see the real you
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    woooooweeeeee!!!
    undressin.....dis was attempting
    flow on in da nude str8 naked
    whewwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice
    straight to the point
    wonderful drop
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I loved the double meaning here. The obvious, the body...hey, I ain't mad at ya sis, lol. But digging deeper, seeing the mind, the soul, naked. Wow.
     
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    this was :hot: and i gotta say that u ain't take no time sayin what u had to say. very straight forward and true.............flow on..........flow on... :coffee:
     
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    all I came to do was read this poem and now I find myself striped naked...lol

    This was a hot one here nice drop poet! :devil:
     
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