Black Poetry : Naked

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  1. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yes

    this piece is fire

    if someone is going to love you they should love you for who you are

    and i hope that there could be more of that and people

    doing the right thing

    and doing right by each other

    but that would be to easy

    lol

    great piece

    i love the love of self here
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    let it be known da true and nakedness of thee red hot joint
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If it all could be that simple...
    ...But @$$holes make it that hard
    (my version of "Ex-Factor")
    Thanks for the love
    It is very appreciated.
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aww....thank you.
    I appreciate it.
     
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    To find someone who loves you in the raw...now that's real love right there. Enjoyed the genuine feel of your expression, poetess.
     
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    Uncensored, unmolested, nude, bare, au naturale... That sounds especially nice with this hot weather:swim:.

    Nonetheless, I did get the gist of this piece. Great reading pleasure:spinstar:

    :book:

    :picture:


     
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    I agree with Da Street ... definitely sizzling !!
     
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    Sha'iyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you make me

    you make me wanna
    leave the one i'm with
    and start a new relations....

    anyway, imma let that burn

    nice drop, babydoll

    ShugaShane
    :qqb023:
     
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    Sweet baby_face:
    Very Nice drop. You know you can't
    be naked for everyone. Some cant take it
    or understand it. Nothing like finding that someone
    you feel comfortable to bare all.
    Really feeln' your flo.

    Much Luv
     
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