Poetry Critiques : My Center

[Khasm13]

word...welcome to the critique forum flo-real...
i see you came over here with both guns blastin....good ish
this poem was a great example of balancing forces in our life
i started off thinking you were talking about concept
then as i got further into the poem...i started thinking that
you were talking about a person...either way
the concept was digested and it tasted pretty dern good...lol
keep dropin them poet...

one love
khasm

 

[$$RICH$$]

very nice mindful trip

 

[dymondtanae]

that's all that needs to be sad