Black People : Let's write a song together.

[skuderjaymes]

looks like the soundcloud.com embeds are not working right.. 　you can still hear all the clips at https://soundcloud.com/skuder-jaymes

 

[skuderjaymes]

That night in my sleep
I dreamed I couldn't breathe
Felt your hands all over me
And no it wasn't intimacy
My life was in your hands
That I need to understand
Awaken by reality
That in real life your love is killing me

And ill never, never again



My dreams become reality
So this time its fantasy
My king will surely find me
And in love we will always be
His touch gives me life
Never would he cause me strife
From this day forward I won't
Never ever let no one abuse me

And ill never, never again

I am being brave... I did sing it to you playing maybe I can get enough nerve to sing it so you can hear.

I really like what you did with this.. your melody on "And no it wasn't intimacy" has me hearing that motif all over the song... I'm making a new instrumental that fits your cadence better..

 

[MahoganyUnique]

I really like what you did with this.. your melody on "And no it wasn't intimacy" has me hearing that motif all over the song... I'm making a new instrumental that fits your cadence better..

Thanks. Really liked the original but can't wait to hear what you create with it. I was hoping I didn't swing to far left with that but idk, first thing that came to mind. I know if I revisited it now I wld spark something totally different. I was thinking it wasn't a sad beat but adding a sad story was different. One of my fav songs is stacy barthe, "drink my pain away" and the beat is kinda fun but the song is really sad.

 

[skuderjaymes]

Thanks!

When I sang that verse, the pitch is higher then info's verse...But I'm note good with notes and octanes and whatnot...but it the I wasn't feeling the evenness of it...like there should be some fluctuation and then at the end (Never again....Never again)soften.

There's an instrumental to write to.. in the same key as Info's verse on soundcloud now...

https://soundcloud.com/skuder-jaymes

 

[MsInterpret]

There's an instrumental to write to.. in the same key as Info's verse on soundcloud now...

https://soundcloud.com/skuder-jaymes

This one??