Black Poetry : his name is Mr. Right

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  1. MissPoetik

    MissPoetik Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    never again will I love with all my heart
    it always ends up breaking
    the man I thought was truly the one
    was the man who was really faking
    these trials of love just make me wonder
    about the one that had no chance
    the hundreds of anxious men I’ve met
    who attempted to trap me in a trance
    but instead I chose the wordy one
    who said what I wanted to hear
    and wasted a lot of precious time
    that adds up to countless years
    how easy it is to find someone
    with whom to spend a steamy night
    but eventually the morning will come
    and still no mr. right…

    P.S.
    this is not my story anymore but it was at the time that i wrote it and i'm sure that someone can relate out there....
     
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    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I felt like this at a certain time and no man was a good man. But if dat special one is out there, to treat u right, to understand what's hurtin u inside, who cares about u, and who keeps it real, dat person will come along.

    I wish u da best misspoetik:)

    Aaliyahmonet
     
  3. MissPoetik

    MissPoetik Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mr. right

    yeah... i discovered that. all men were on my hit list and it seemed that i would never find the one. but, now that i have, things are different.
     
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    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm glad dat u found da right man in your life. May he continue to love and cherish u and fulfill your every need.

    Aaliyahmonet:)
     
  5. luvtoluv

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    Very nice!
    I've come to realize that there is no such thing as "the one"
    You find someone that you're compatiable with and you make
    it work together.

    Fow on...!
     
  6. Godfather

    Godfather Active Member MEMBER

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    This is phat and really loved it. Makes sense and know how u feel (felt) to a certain extent.

    Peace
    Godfather
     
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