Black Poetry : Message on the bottom

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Passionfruit005, Dec 27, 2005.

  1. Passionfruit005

    Passionfruit005 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wishin for Nikes of different flavors
    tha savory taste of success
    the stress to never be less,
    like sleepless night dreaming of freshly paved walks
    on the side where the basketball courts hoops freshly live
    big game spoken by new faces, wishin for victory tastin
    the court to be king,
    the road to redeem,
    common ground
    with the right fan,
    maybe the white man, maybe get a big break
    and a nike ad, with the cherry sweet taste of victory
    the beat of the streets, like candy for the feet,
    making the right step, the next step to fame and fortune
    modelin, street shoes on the next way run, i mean runway
    like false advertisement for the sole,
    giving you the air to be just like
    Jordan, or more then...depending on the next brand and expense then
    common sense then, not to believe the hype,
    but giving the last penny down
    to the last cents, for the rebound, or possible there new now,
    recycling much old flavors and call them a treat now, like classics
    taste better apple strawberry, then the strawberry apple introduced last week......
    how the sugars melt on the taste buds, of thoes who taste none , or tasteless
    unless the candy is manufactured, no matter the practice, or tactics
    as long as it matches.... message on the bottom of nikes wit different flavors
    be a winner, tastes like happiness , peppermint flavored , with cash flow
    if you follow this crowd, we'll lead you to get more.
    but some minds see only as deep as the eyes see,
    to commercialized products that all tell lies
    be mislead by ads that have one thing in mind,
    but overlook tha direction it was headed,
    somewhere between cash flow , and where the wind blows,
    came off track,
    nikes of different flavors, with the message on the bottom
    Mines taste like peach,
    and sends the message of peace
    whut flavor is yours
    and whuts its bottom messege to u ?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deep thoughts .......dis make u wonder and think
     
  3. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this message on the bottom was moving flow on poet.:star: :kiss1:
     
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    Wow what message indeed
    Mine like Honey and melon dew
    Sweet and smooth to the touch
    Message blends more than 31 flavors
    For that certain rush
    The rush of passion-Saying please touch
    Deliver with certain skills
    Message opens you feel
    From the top to the bottom
    The passion flavor within
    whut flavor is yours
    and whuts its bottom messege to u ?

    Beautiful Piece Poet
    I loved It
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Loving both the word play and the message here. Commercialized messages can never compare with our own slogans. Your style is superb.
     
  6. Passionfruit005

    Passionfruit005 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow, im thankin u all for showin me love, truelly,i've felt nothing but love since my first drop, and i hope i will continue to be able to give and receive that type of love, holla back passion
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yo' "P", you BLOWIN'-UP already. i love the way in which you've expressed the notion here. Keep on doing your thang!
     
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