Black Poetry : EYES WIDE SHUT

[queentswana]

I gave you my heart, when I should have just shared it with you.
Instead of having "one", you now have "two" hearts...and I have none.

My mind went away cause I had nothing to say. My voice always echoes
in vain.
I fought hard for my pride, still you pushed it aside...I have only myself to
blame.

Than I gave you not half...but the whole of my soul, when I should have kept
half for a spare.
But...it's gone now...you win, there's not a thing I can do...but start my life
over again.

Unchain my heart and return my soul...please let me start over anew.
But remember the words that I've always said...
...I'll go to my GRAVE...Loving you !!

 

[MzBlkAngel]

wow this is very emotional
feelin ya here
nice drop.....Angel

 

[msluciousb]

Oh my Queen!!!!!!!!!!!

What a beautifully melancholy scribe, so sad when love is given and taken for granted.
But it's a lesson that you will never have to repeat...Once burned twice shy!
Sorry for the guy who lost you...now go on and start that new life! GOD HAS SOMETHING
WONDERFUL WAITING FOR YOU!

Blessings on your house!

 

[$$RICH$$]

dis was awesome scribing love the way u did it

 

[kenyatta]

I'm so glad you weren't thinking about me when you wrote that, cause obviously your eyes were not only wide shut, but open closed. In the movie Waiting to Exhale, which I liked, I came to the divine conclusion that no woman should be waiting to exhale if they are careful about What They Inhale. Just Food For Thought