Black Poetry : Eternity

[MzBlkAngel]

take my love
feed me heaven
become that sweet taste
i so yearn
take my hand
as you make me
feel good inside
i oblige you baby
lets walk in to eternity
as i give you me
let our spirits
dance in ecstasy
as we blend soulfully
i wanna be lost in you
you lost in me and
Eternity we will be

 

[Monetary]

Thanks for the responses.

Mz Blk Angel...thanks for the response flow. It's tightttttttttttttttt.

for sharing your thoughts on my peace.

 

[queentswana]

to every one who has responded. However, I do feel the poem was unfinished...imho.

I do appreciate your comments.

for sharing your comments

Let me tell you a little secret about love, there is nothing to finish, for "love has no ending" ...that, you can take to the bank.